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Kiss me
No, harder
Rid me of every scar
Suck the night-old whiskey away from all my black and blue
Touch me until I don't feel worthless
All these broken ribs
The fluttering lids of both black eyes  
Pray away every awful thing I've done
And lick the salt away from broken skin
The exit wounds of bullets
The little lines of knife bites
Just love me until I'm mad
And kiss me until I'm whole again
Just a short lil' piece of sweetness. I'm not uploading as much. Trying to expand what I write about. Exploring story telling poetry, but for now I'm working on this style. It's more wordy than how I write normally.

Thoughts on this new style?

-G.
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sparklyMarvel Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2015  New Deviant Student Writer
so cute!!!! :3
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DizzTizzMCRfan Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks, love!
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DizzTizzMCRfan Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome x
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
This poem is amazing
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013
sure thing my friend
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Sinnomangirl Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I absolutely love this! The visuals are fantastic and put together in such a romantic way.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my God!!! :D Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!
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InkySnowflakes Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what a powerful poem! You've said a lot with very little words, and it really does linger in your mind after reading it. I cannot express enough how spectacular a poem this is.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh!!! Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! :'D
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InkySnowflakes Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! It was a wonderful piece. c:
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
Aw, thanks. :heart:
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DraganTheMighty Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Passion & Desperation.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Naturally.
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noodlenini Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow, this is beautiful
Such a great way of contrasting the good with the pain
Such a great poem :')
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks!!! :D I'm happy you enjoyed!!!!!!!
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X3beyondthesunx3 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013   Writer
this is magnificent. great job, amazing
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much for your kind words!!! :heart: So glad you enjoyed.
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BlueSoulber Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gosh im not much a fan of literature here on DA.. but this is just so beautiful .. I reread it like a dozen times.. its really deep and strong. I just love it
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Aww!!!! Thank you so much!!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!! :iconsuperheroglompplz: :heart:
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BlueSoulber Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gosh yes! I was really romantic and passionate and it was just something I could relate too
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
I'm so glad!!!!
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chewyraezen Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
powerful stuff. love it.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks. :D I'm glad you liked it!!
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks. :D I'm glad you liked it!!
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
this is nice :)
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
D'aww. :'D :heart:
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nounouisawesome Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
i love the the lines
you should do this more often
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Aww. :3 Thank you. I will. :heart:
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nounouisawesome Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
no problem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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