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Kiss me
No, harder
Rid me of every scar
Suck the night-old whiskey away from all my black and blue
Touch me until I don't feel worthless
All these broken ribs
The fluttering lids of both black eyes  
Pray away every awful thing I've done
And lick the salt away from broken skin
The exit wounds of bullets
The little lines of knife bites
Just love me until I'm mad
And kiss me until I'm whole again
Just a short lil' piece of sweetness. I'm not uploading as much. Trying to expand what I write about. Exploring story telling poetry, but for now I'm working on this style. It's more wordy than how I write normally.

Thoughts on this new style?

-G.
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DizzTizzMCRfan Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks, love!
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DizzTizzMCRfan Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome x
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
This poem is amazing
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :D
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ArtofDezzy Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Student Writer
sure thing my friend
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Sinnomangirl Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I absolutely love this! The visuals are fantastic and put together in such a romantic way.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my God!!! :D Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!
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InkySnowflakes Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what a powerful poem! You've said a lot with very little words, and it really does linger in your mind after reading it. I cannot express enough how spectacular a poem this is.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
Oh my gosh!!! Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! :'D
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