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I thought I'd finally caught a break
Maybe after all this pain I've found solitude
But the whole time you were looking at me, you pictured her
Everytime you found your way back to me it meant nothing
That look when you see me, was only because I reminded you of her
But how can you deny that?
The glint in your eyes and the way you let me touch you
This connection I feel to you even now
Do I mean something to you? Or was I just naive?
I still love you.
So much.
But I hate myself.
Because I love you.
                                       So much...
Not much I can say about this.

-Ellie.
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dravencallaway Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice! I can feel the emotion on this poem. Good job portraying it.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks you. x)
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dravencallaway Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome. you should read some of my work. you might like it. if you do let me know. please!
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Writer
Ok. :) I'll let you know when I do, I have a bunch of writing to do today.
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dravencallaway Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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The-Warden-Rose Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Been there not fun...
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Student Writer
Yurp.
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