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I didn't cut today
Because when I was angry I thought of you
Of how when you dominated my thoughts
You appeared in front of me
The sudden light in your eyes
I haven't seen it for so long
And how it took my breath away
I try to remember the shaking of my hands
My swimming vision
So captivated by the motion of your mouth
Hypnotized by the warm crescendo of your voice
Drowning in the heat of your gaze
I smile
When I wonder about my self-control
Wondering why I didn't kiss you
And promise you that she could never love you
Not as much as me
I don't understand anything, really
Why I continue this
Over and over
Again and again
Why I continue to fall for you
Why I was shaking when you spoke to me
Horrified
Mystified
Because in that moment, I realized
I was falling in love again
Maybe Cupid is actually Loki in disguise.

Hmm.

-Ellie.
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happyhappymorbid Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'm quoting you on that description. that is wonderful.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
:)
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
... This work matches the song "Over and Over" by Nana Miskouri. Give that a listen, you'll fall in love with it, much the same way I love the ending of this work. :)

A'rite, I'm definitely going to give that song a listen.
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
Glad you enjoy. :) And I will. ^_^
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sure thing :)
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ghost-viper Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012
i almost cried when i read this cause i can relate but i love it
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
D: I'm sorry!!! :tighthug:
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ghost-viper Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
no dont be it just brought back memory's :)
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Writer
Ahh. :)
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ShinuOokami Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
In a different way (just i'm a guy wanting girls is the difference) i felt this same way lol. i understand completely, i must say i really love your writing :) very interesting, i love story board style like this and have been trying to incorporate it in my own works
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
Wow. Just. Thank you so much!!! :heart: :tighthug:
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DubhEitilt Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
awesome...can't wait til he comes home /cry
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
:hug:
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ShadowtheHedgehog137 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
D: nununununununununu not my feels again..... ooo, this is so real to me... :iconcryforeverplz:
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Student Writer
:tighthug: IM SORRY FOR HURTING THE FEELS D':
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ShadowtheHedgehog137 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
is ok!! :D
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
x)
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aalie Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student General Artist
YES. Secretly....Loki being cupid would make a lot of sense...
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:iconmalphasloveshisfries:
malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Student Writer
ikr
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Shadows-Seductress Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm <3 this reminds me..
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
momomo
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Shadows-Seductress Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
<3 I loves you
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Student Writer
I loves you!! <3
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Shadows-Seductress Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I loves you too!!!
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Student Writer
8D
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The-Warden-Rose Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
T_T Emma you have captured my feels
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malphasloveshisfries Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Student Writer
Its what I do
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